Audience Feedback.

overall my teacher and the class thought our first thriller opening idea, was the best. As it is unique and is quite creepy, and that it isn't a typical thriller story line, even though we would have used as many typical conventions as possible. Our class and teacher pointed out that it would be quite difficult to produce that idea, as there would be alot of special effects in it such, for example, we wanted to make henry look like a ghost, so that would have been difficult, we also wanted to write on the machinery using the macs, but this proved to be to difficult. The location we wanted to use, would have been perfect for the idea, as we wanted to use an airfield, for the WW2 theme. This would have given our opening alot of atmosphere, and would have really had the audience on the edge of their seats.

The feedback we got for our second idea, was fairly positive as it would be held in an abattoir this would give us an extremely good atmosphere. There would be dead deer hanging from the chains, our teacher pointed out that we could use this to our advantage and get some really good camera shots of the dead deer. The abattoir we be quite dark, so we would have to get some lighting, as we would need it desperately. How ever as it is a hostage situation, that is a very typical of a thriller, so we would had to change it slightly so it would be unique. The props we would use are quite difficult to get hold of, for example a dead deer would be hard to get, as you have to go out and shoot one. The gun wouldn't have been to hard, as henry knows people who have them. The knife would be quite easy as well, as it would just be one of henry skinning knifes.

The feedback we got for our third idea was that it was extremely unique, making it a good idea. The idea is a bit creepy though, as the father kills his own daughter, as she wasn't perfect and was just a nunsense. He couldn't take it anymore, so he ended up killing her, as she wasn't good enough for him. This hits a negative subject in the world, as one in four women are abused, whether its physical, mental or verbally that is performed by a family member or a boyfriend/husband. Also as we would need to film in a cemetery, it would be pretty difficult getting permission to film there, so we thought it wouldn't be the best of ideas.

Overall we came up with the idea to merge idea 2 and 3, giving us a religious thriller